
Maria asks…
your opinions on this poem.?
3 by 3 is ment to express 9 months of labour.
Mans Evolution
The seeds are sowed,
Three by three,
The chick hatches,
The seedlings now trees,
Flowers bloom, as adolescent,
Sun’s shinning,
Flood waters arising,
Rainfalls poring, down our cheeks,
A rainbow appears,
As the bird fly’s free,
Alpinist climbs the mountain side,
As the bird flies by and soars the sky,
Sunflower, petals – withered,
Wrist watch stoped,
As new offspring’s sprout,
New stars are formed,
Our galaxies expanding,
Evolution forever evolving, never ending.

Susan answers:
Absolutley beautiful. I like the way you made it the first and last line of a stanza rhyme. In the first stanza.
Rainfalls poring, down our cheeks,
A rainbow appears,
As the bird fly’s free,
my favorite part…If you want more opinions than here’s a online poetry community…
Best-love-poems.com
It’s not just for love poems there are 10 categories. Keep writing! You have talent.

Betty asks…
would these colors match?
i have a brownish-red tube top and i have to have a shirt under it, for school, so would a plain black shirt match? i dont have time to buy a new shirt either. also would a pale yellow shirt under match or would it look kinda like a sunflower?

Susan answers:
The black/brown /red combo sounds like dried blood.
Try adding:
cream or off white
peach or orange
yellow or gold
lime or kelly
turquoise
Aslo, consider wearing a button up shirt over the tube top – fastened except for bottom two buttons, then tied around waist, loosely.

Mary asks…
Screen Name Suggestions???
-i’m 15
-class of 2010
-fave color is blue
-i’m shy and sweet (thats wat ppl say anyway)
-i love jewelry
-i love the sun and sunflowers
-i love New York (i live there, lol)
it’s for AIM
THANK YOU =]
*sorry for the category!* but please answer anyway..!

Susan answers:
NYsweetie10
NYsweetie2010
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